Challenge: Give your best critique!

I noticed that even though we get lots of entries, submissions and all, nobody really cared if the members submit their works.
This is kind of depressing, since our works are here so that we can give out constructive criticisms to all the members. It's not that they need to have Premium just to say that they want their works to be critiqued. We are all here to help each other in improving and knowing what else are missing in each of our works.

With this CHALLENGE, I am hoping that all of us will participate. Give out your best critique, which is complete of all the elements that we look for in one.

I.E.

Content

Essence

Improvement

Message

We should be doing this and all so that each of us knows that every member is really a part of the Cafe.

We will hold this CHALLENGE for the rest of August and September. We will give out 20 to the winner of this Challenge.

RULES:
Choose one member's work
Give out your best critique on that certain work's page
Like this journal (so that we know that you are participating
and
Post the link here
Multiple entries are accepted

Note: Donate points to for features, and so that we can also be sure that we can hold more contests.